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Blurred Lines

March 30th, 2017, 7:47 am

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Sometimes the line between good and evil is a little blurred.
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Reply WiispNightmare, March 30th, 2017, 7:59 am

I
am the one
I am strong
I am fearless
I never flinch,
never fail
I
am the one
I belong
I am tearless
It's a cinch
I prevail



I
am not the one
I am weak
I am afraid
I stand back
I can't do it
I
am not the one
outlook bleak
poorly made
Stay in the black
Can't get through it


She's the one
I am not
I'm the one
She's too fraught
with worry
I'm just caught
In her web
One is alive
The other is not
One controls
What the other sought
Two divided then combined
Into the void their fate is deigned...

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Everyone Else's Comments

Reply WildfireK, March 30th, 2017, 8:16 am

Did you get inspired by my line poem?

Anyway, love the second verse, especially the juxtaposition between characters and the "One is alive, the other is not" but I do think the word aligned might rhyme better than deigned.. but the meaning behind that word choice might be messed up, so IDK.

Reply WiispNightmare, March 30th, 2017, 1:37 pm

@WildfireK: Hm possibly XD
This just kinda came to me and I wrote as I went, so it's not well thought out

And I don't think deigned works super well but aligned wouldn't fit the meaning needed.
Ah well, you know?

Reply WildfireK, March 30th, 2017, 9:18 am

@WiispNightmare:
I posted another poem!

You just keep inspiring me!

http://starsandsmoke.smackjeeves.com/comics/2414348/infrared-a-poem/

Reply WiispNightmare, March 30th, 2017, 1:38 pm

@WildfireK: Really? Wow, ok!
Watch us like continually inspire each other until it's just a poem trade >w<

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