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Tear Them Down

May 15th, 2017, 4:36 pm

What Most People Think: 5.00
SATUUUUURN
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Reply WiispNightmare, May 15th, 2017, 4:36 pm

Another one.
Btw, this series is called Caged.
There should be one more somewhere around here...
(Sorry these are so terrible)

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Everyone Else's Comments

Reply WildfireK, May 15th, 2017, 4:49 pm

"Walls make you weak"

Wiisp, please tell me how to make a great, short, simple and powerful quote just like that, cause whenever I try and do that, I become so vague that its powerfulness just dissipates.

Like

"We all know this song, we cannot resist, raise a glass to all the good we missed, I sit down to make a stand, but Nature makes me raise my hand" is the best I can do and it isn't powerful at first glance

Reply WiispNightmare, May 15th, 2017, 4:51 pm

@WildfireK: Well um
First you come up with the idea you want to get across
And then you rhyme it



I DUNNO HONESTLY CX
I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS THAT POWERFUL
Although I mean, it is true.

Reply WildfireK, May 15th, 2017, 4:55 pm

@WiispNightmare:
Okay
Well I want to portray that people, due to instinct, hate differences, and that causes Rayfi to doubt herself because she is eaily influenced by other's opinions, even though they don't know her philosophy.

Ah!
I've got it

I guess I'm but the only one who wants to see in infrared,
But I guess that all the colors of the rainbow seem to need to want me dead


Nailed it not vague at all
Then I can say it really fast like shes having a nervous breakdown

Reply WiispNightmare, May 15th, 2017, 5:07 pm

@WildfireK: The "I guess" in the second sentence was not needed :T

I guess I'm the only one who wants to see infrared
'cuz all the colors of the rainbow seem to want me dead

Reply WildfireK, May 15th, 2017, 5:19 pm

@WiispNightmare:
Two guesses for emphasis on doubt :3
But you're right.

Reply WiispNightmare, May 15th, 2017, 5:22 pm

@WildfireK: Hahaha yeah right >:3

Reply xLollyx, May 16th, 2017, 3:04 am

Oh my gooood these are awesome!!
You've inspiredd me to try doing these you're so good at themmm

Reply WiispNightmare, May 16th, 2017, 7:02 am

@xLollyx: Really?
Are you sure?
I'm not really good at them.
But I look forward to seeing how yours turn out! (probs better than mine >w<;)

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